Post by ChibiForte on Jul 29, 2012 20:14:16 GMT -5
the basics
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Name: Tomake
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance: Picture reference
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Elite Jounin
Class: A
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
character information
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Personality: Quite outgoing and a bit dense, Tomake isn't exactly as hardened and serious as most shinobi that share her rank. She's never one to sugar-coat her words, and often comes across as a bit blunt, even rude sometimes, for doing so. She is passionate in everything that she feels - whether it's happiness, anger, or sadness, she will feel it to an extreme extent. Tomake is a bit of a hopeless romantic, and dreams of falling in love and starting a family when she's older. It's not uncommon for her to just waltz up to a guy and say, "Hey, you are moderately attractive and I think we should go out somewhere." Subtlety and Tomake do not go hand in hand.
Likes: Meat, her job, perverted conversations, animals, inspiring genin and other kids to work hard, peeking at attractive guys at a hot spring, soaking in hot springs, and eating.
Dislikes: Vegetarians, people that are way too serious, bratty kids, and working on things that are difficult for her.
Relationships: Uzumaki Shinji (student; to be registered), Shinimae Hikaru (student; to be registered), Saya (student; to be registered)
Strengths: Taijutsu, instruction, speed, some slight medical stuff, chakra-blocking, short and random bursts of incredibly intelligent thoughts and strategies, and the ability to immediately memorize details or knowledge that most people take weeks to memorize.
Weaknesses: Chakra control, long-range attacks, genjutsu, using extensive medical ninjutsu, impromptu thinking and strategy-formulating, remembering simple and short-term things like what she wore, ate, or said only a few hours prior.
Fighting Style: Up close and with punching and kicking! Tomake loves to get down and dirty in a scrapper-like fighting style. She has extensive knowledge of the human body, and will take advantage of fighting close to her enemy to attempt things like chakra-blocking and incapacitating the opponent via pressure points on the body. Tomake is capable of performing basic healing medical jutsu. However, because her control of her chakra is so terrible, her healing is twice as effective, but the amount of time she is able to hold the jutsu for is three times shorter. Therefore, she will never make a good medic and is more suited for healing her own (or her students') minor injuries. Tomake's chakra supply will immediately burn out if she tries to heal somebody for even an average amount of time. She should not be depended upon for medical assistance unless there is no other option. She is able to use a few fire techniques, as they come very naturally to the Uchiha clan, but definitely favors taijutsu and prefers to use that more than anything else. At any random given time, Tomake will have short bursts of incredible intelligence; however, she cannot control when this happens and will forget what the fuck she said immediately after. So, if you miss what she said, and it was incredibly useful, you're screwed. She's not even close to being a genius, but she's not a moron either.
jutsu & techniques
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Weapons: HER FISTS. That, and the standard-issue kunai/shuriken, along with some cord for performing fire techniques that require it. Nothing special.
Elemental Affinities: Katon.
-One Thousand Years of Death (I AM NOT KIDDING)
-100 (and 1000 I would assume) Meter Punch, but she's kinda shitty at it
-Fist Slam (but with fire instead of lightning, if that's okay?)
-Hephaestus (Tomake's variation of Zeus
-Drunken Fist
-Leaf Rising Wind
-Generic A-rank genjutsu. She kind of sucks at this.
-Generic fuinjutsu
-I cannot even remember what it's called when you block someone's chakra points but she can do that okay
-None!
-Eight Gates (Tomake can get up to the sixth gate, the Gate of View, and is just BARELY able to pry the seventh gate open. This is used only under dire circumstances.)
-Morning Peacock
Pfft are you kidding me no way she can do this shit
the description
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History: Tomake, as an Uchiha, has had great expectations placed on her for as long as she's been around. No matter what teaching techniques were used on her as a child, she just never found herself able to control her chakra well at all. This completely dashed her dream of being a medical ninja, as it requires great chakra control. However, a fellow medic apprentice noticed that Tomake had a knack for remembering details that other people needed extensive studying to memorize (even though she can't remember what the hell she ate for dinner the day before) She then decided that her new goal would be to become Jounin (she exceeded her dream and became not only a Jounin, but an ELITE Jounin), and pass on any and all knowledge she owns to the next generation. Because so many teaching techniques were used on her as a child, she is aware of many and is able to find a strategy that works for any student she has. She spends her days training her genin squad and taking them on missions.
Other: Now, I understand that having Drunken Fist and a forbidden jutsu like Eight Gates seems pretty bullshit. Allow me to explain myself: Tomake studied her ass off to become a medic, but her chakra control is so horrendous that she just physically could not become one. Because of her hardcore studying as a medic apprentice, however, she has extensive knowledge of human physiology, and would know where the gates are and easily be able to open them. To be a medic for shinobi, one must not only understand the human body, but know the chakra pathways as well, right? I will be more than happy to modify Tomake if Eight Gates seems to overpowered, but I personally feel that her shortcomings in other areas, as well as her background, makes this plausible.
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Name: Tomake
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Appearance: Picture reference
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Elite Jounin
Class: A
Clan: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
character information
- - - - - - - - - - -
Personality: Quite outgoing and a bit dense, Tomake isn't exactly as hardened and serious as most shinobi that share her rank. She's never one to sugar-coat her words, and often comes across as a bit blunt, even rude sometimes, for doing so. She is passionate in everything that she feels - whether it's happiness, anger, or sadness, she will feel it to an extreme extent. Tomake is a bit of a hopeless romantic, and dreams of falling in love and starting a family when she's older. It's not uncommon for her to just waltz up to a guy and say, "Hey, you are moderately attractive and I think we should go out somewhere." Subtlety and Tomake do not go hand in hand.
Likes: Meat, her job, perverted conversations, animals, inspiring genin and other kids to work hard, peeking at attractive guys at a hot spring, soaking in hot springs, and eating.
Dislikes: Vegetarians, people that are way too serious, bratty kids, and working on things that are difficult for her.
Relationships: Uzumaki Shinji (student; to be registered), Shinimae Hikaru (student; to be registered), Saya (student; to be registered)
Strengths: Taijutsu, instruction, speed, some slight medical stuff, chakra-blocking, short and random bursts of incredibly intelligent thoughts and strategies, and the ability to immediately memorize details or knowledge that most people take weeks to memorize.
Weaknesses: Chakra control, long-range attacks, genjutsu, using extensive medical ninjutsu, impromptu thinking and strategy-formulating, remembering simple and short-term things like what she wore, ate, or said only a few hours prior.
Fighting Style: Up close and with punching and kicking! Tomake loves to get down and dirty in a scrapper-like fighting style. She has extensive knowledge of the human body, and will take advantage of fighting close to her enemy to attempt things like chakra-blocking and incapacitating the opponent via pressure points on the body. Tomake is capable of performing basic healing medical jutsu. However, because her control of her chakra is so terrible, her healing is twice as effective, but the amount of time she is able to hold the jutsu for is three times shorter. Therefore, she will never make a good medic and is more suited for healing her own (or her students') minor injuries. Tomake's chakra supply will immediately burn out if she tries to heal somebody for even an average amount of time. She should not be depended upon for medical assistance unless there is no other option. She is able to use a few fire techniques, as they come very naturally to the Uchiha clan, but definitely favors taijutsu and prefers to use that more than anything else. At any random given time, Tomake will have short bursts of incredible intelligence; however, she cannot control when this happens and will forget what the fuck she said immediately after. So, if you miss what she said, and it was incredibly useful, you're screwed. She's not even close to being a genius, but she's not a moron either.
jutsu & techniques
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Weapons: HER FISTS. That, and the standard-issue kunai/shuriken, along with some cord for performing fire techniques that require it. Nothing special.
Elemental Affinities: Katon.
-One Thousand Years of Death (I AM NOT KIDDING)
-100 (and 1000 I would assume) Meter Punch, but she's kinda shitty at it
-Fist Slam (but with fire instead of lightning, if that's okay?)
-Hephaestus (Tomake's variation of Zeus
-Drunken Fist
-Leaf Rising Wind
-Generic A-rank genjutsu. She kind of sucks at this.
-Generic fuinjutsu
-I cannot even remember what it's called when you block someone's chakra points but she can do that okay
-None!
-Eight Gates (Tomake can get up to the sixth gate, the Gate of View, and is just BARELY able to pry the seventh gate open. This is used only under dire circumstances.)
-Morning Peacock
Pfft are you kidding me no way she can do this shit
the description
- - - - - - - - - - -
History: Tomake, as an Uchiha, has had great expectations placed on her for as long as she's been around. No matter what teaching techniques were used on her as a child, she just never found herself able to control her chakra well at all. This completely dashed her dream of being a medical ninja, as it requires great chakra control. However, a fellow medic apprentice noticed that Tomake had a knack for remembering details that other people needed extensive studying to memorize (even though she can't remember what the hell she ate for dinner the day before) She then decided that her new goal would be to become Jounin (she exceeded her dream and became not only a Jounin, but an ELITE Jounin), and pass on any and all knowledge she owns to the next generation. Because so many teaching techniques were used on her as a child, she is aware of many and is able to find a strategy that works for any student she has. She spends her days training her genin squad and taking them on missions.
Other: Now, I understand that having Drunken Fist and a forbidden jutsu like Eight Gates seems pretty bullshit. Allow me to explain myself: Tomake studied her ass off to become a medic, but her chakra control is so horrendous that she just physically could not become one. Because of her hardcore studying as a medic apprentice, however, she has extensive knowledge of human physiology, and would know where the gates are and easily be able to open them. To be a medic for shinobi, one must not only understand the human body, but know the chakra pathways as well, right? I will be more than happy to modify Tomake if Eight Gates seems to overpowered, but I personally feel that her shortcomings in other areas, as well as her background, makes this plausible.
I edited everything in question one more time and tried to better clarify what I originally meant. Hopefully everything checks out now. Thanks again~
